FICTION - Hunger

The cereal box depicted a Sikh man, wearing a turban with a bright, glowing jewel at its centre. He was smiling. It was a strange thing, to see a Sikh used in the language of capitalism, sitting there on the supermarket shelf. This place had been abandoned by capitalism some time ago. It only took a few floods.

The tendrils of the botanical invaders continued their slow, methodical invasion inward, looking for spectrums of light they could use, and any moisture they could extract from within the ruined plaza.

The lights of the store had ceased functioning a decade ago, cut off from the grid by a flood that had engulfed the region. It was evacuated, and everything was left as it was. The landscape was to now be forever more eroded by the projected re-occurrences of the flood.

The town, the little store had been abandoned, like so many others. The town, written off as unviable by a committee in an office somewhere cared not for the displaced populace.

It was all a matter of perspective.

This cereal box was on a high shelf, and the perennial flood waters failed again and again to wash it away. The floor, or rather, what now made up the floor told a different story. The decaying clumps of packaging, product, and calories, made up a damp, compacting, warm, composting slurry. A welcoming place for the likes of Earthworms and exploratory plants seeing nutrition and a place to grow their roots.

They were hungry, not just for fertiliser. As the vegetation closed in on all sides, even the tallest shelves would be engulfed by the enquiring network of branches, vines, leaves, and flora, seeking to flourish in a place from which it had been excluded, until, at least, the next flood would come.

Survival wasn't a guarantee in this place. It was a constant battle. Sprawl too far from an oasis of nutrition, without finding more, and perish. Rot, and feed the next generation. Seek nutrition in multiple places at once, and run out of energy. Rot, and feed the next generation.

The plant life went through a cycle of renewal and decay, and eventually, slowly, mercilessly, it would crawl the shelves to the roof of the building and crack it open, exposing the radiance of the light to all below, excepting what it greedily took for itself.

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With a prompt of just hunger, I failed to think of anything other than the Florence + The Machine song of the same name. Therefore, it took me about four or five false starts to give this story a bit of an original slant. Though, it probably isn't all that original. Some part of me will forever live in Jeff Van Der Meer's Area X, from Annihilation, as it is a book that touched me deeply for its poetic descriptions of decay, renewal and how nature will always win.



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Where there is hunger, you will find Sikhs bringing food. Some of the greatest people in the world.

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There was a reason I used that as a symbol for the story :)

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Love this man . Drip feeding me into thinking the worst . I was thinking zombies at the start but I was glad to hear it was just flood plain which brings me back to my first job . In a supermarket on a flood plain and they used to bring us in mid flood to take said cereal boxes and put them on the top shelves while a little jobie passed me by . In my waders

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😂 Welcome to the floaty supermarket, don't mind the botanical, lovecraftian horrors growing in aisle 4.

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No bodies floating by, and it appears that all the protagonists made it past the last sentence... hope you're feeling ok.

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ome part of me will forever live in Jeff Van Der Meer's Area X, from Annihilation, as it is a book that touched me deeply for its poetic descriptions of decay, renewal and how nature will always win.

Also, 'The Last of Us'. And as I said in Discord, 'The World Without Us'. I absolutely love any images that evoke how nature takes over - it erases us quite quickly, I think.

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Yes! I was envisioning scenes from (The game) The Last of Us when writing this, too. I thoroughly enjoyed both of the titles. Excellent world building. I haven't seen the series, though. :)

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The first series is great. Second, with exception of said world building, I feel ambivalent about.

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Nice story, not sure how to comment. so will just leave what comes to mind.

i found a chip, think it was from macca's or HJ or something under the seat of my car the other day...
I think it had been sitting in the dark there for years, yet it looked like it was still good to eat.

Imagine if the vine thing in you story found an entire burger meal on one of the shelvs, not only would it be in perfect looking still, it could feed for generations.

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That was pretty much the notion of the story :)

I don't eat in my car, she's too shiny and new now.

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Your own description of decay and renewal is pretty great, too. I always enjoy your writing style, though I do need to have the time and tranquility to read it thoroughly. Something for a Saturday morning. Thank you for sharing this!

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Thanks mate, I appreciate it! I don't know where I really get my style from. I read a lot, and broadly, and have so very many varied influences.

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That's how art is created, combining experiences into a new one for others.

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