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I think the short staccato aspect of it plays well into the story. i enjoyed the brevity, in other words. :) marvelous glimpse into a could-be.
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I think the short staccato aspect of it plays well into the story. i enjoyed the brevity, in other words. :) marvelous glimpse into a could-be.
I am rather keen to eventually work on an expansion to this. Maybe stories in the lead-up to, to try and keep it human and emotional. I have too big of a writing-to-do-list as it is, it is just good to get this idea out. :)
I didn't realise I wrote it with a staccato sentence structure. Re-reading it again, I can see that I did, and that was something subconcious, not intentional. I don't understand the why or how I write how I do, I just... do.