RE: FICTION: Vanishing Point
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Many thanks for the high praise! I feel like it could do with more show, don't tell, but I'll get there :)
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Many thanks for the high praise! I feel like it could do with more show, don't tell, but I'll get there :)
Yes, indeed, and a little more development as it is on the shorter side, with perhaps a light edit to refine, but then... you fulfilled the remit of the prompt which appears to have been more artistically orientated :-)