The UNTOLD LOVE.

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Hey, Guys So for the last few weeks I was on one hell of a roller coaster ride. My exams were on. Then I had a few high-intensity football matches to officiate and after all this, I severely fell ill.
Maybe too much work has taken a great toll on my body. So I was like down for a week but in my rest time, I had nothing to do but lie down either watching TV or looking out of the window.
As I had nothing to do there I started writing. And during that time I have written 2 poems. So here is the first one for you. Hope you like it.❤️

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Do tell me in the comment sections how you like this poem. Anything in particular that you want to be improved.
Also if you like this one you can read my previous poem here
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Nice poem, I like the modern touch in it!

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Awesome poetry, no need to change @prasasth life carries on, more poetry will flow. Enjoy your new chapter of life.

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Nice one bhai. bahut acha. You must be young, all that romantic hormonal chemistry you describe in your poem.

The format is really impressive with the font and border.

I spent six months in India, are you there? I could be wrong.

Anyway as for romance...don't fall for the illusion, don'y let it bewilder you, you are courting a ball and chain, a temporary illusion wrapped up in a pretty package for mating. It is your hormones dictating there and nothing romantic.

Poetry is inspiring though and yours is impressive. Just the very end needs a rhyme to really top it off.

Namaste

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Oh no! Waited too long :( The only thing that hurts more than one saying no, is knowing its because the chance wasnt taken soon enough.

Glad you got to rest after all that. I can understand how stressful things can be.

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