RE: The Druid's Dilemma - Part 5
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Your really leaned into Damon’s chaos with Marcia stepping out in a toga scrawled with music, then immediately clocking him for the unpaid tab. The way the coin twist landed right as the fire cut a path made the ADventure feel messy in the best way. I loved taht the leaves in his beard become proof of his blundering, like nature itself is roasting him. Tight pacing, sharp barbs, and now the party feels volatile but fun.
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It is nearly over, I swear :P This was meant to be a single post story, but it just got sooooo long
Let it sprawl, the party keeps growing adn Damon keeps pouring gas on the fire. Marcia showing up made me grin, she might actually keep him on track for once, but teh chaos is half the fun. Stories that breathe like this hit better, so dont worry if it stretches a bit. Think it wraps next part, or will the Blacksmith's Daughter have other plans?
I think there's a few more parts. They're getting harder to write :P